No ur not mistaken. im making a club.
so if anyone is interested in joining or giving me a hand. i need some people to help take care of messages and deviation monitering. if u would like to discuss it, send a note titled "club" and we'll work things out.
All Righty Then!
Pergatory is the title to my comic. updates will start on friday and every following friday. so look to seeing a page a week.
same goes for Deadaleus. from saturday to ever following saturday a Deadaleus page will be posted.(starting on the firs saturday of submission, not upcoming saturday)
as of so far, Deadaleus, has its storyline being built so ull have to wait for that.
for pergatory my story board is not complete. however the basics for construction are down.
lets start with, Alexander Titus and partner Todd Phenix. Alexander is a retireing police officer spending his last year on the force with a fresh from the accademy rookie, Todd Phenix. On patrole they take a call what seems like a regular break in at the Black Age Meusame. On the scene is blood trails leading to dead security gurards. Things seem all the more strang with nothing of value stolen.The Meusame focuses on arts and artifacts salvaged from medievil times. the culprit is a mysteriouse looking man who only was interested in a book. taking normal police action, aiming their guns and demanding co-operation. the man ignores them and starts to walk twards the exit like they're not even there. Phenix fires a warning shot at a pillar directly infront of the mans direction. his attention is grasped. he raises his hands. he is unarmed. points twards a display of weapons and forces a motion tward phenix and tidus. spears swords daggers and javelins are hurled at the two of them. Phenix, with the advantage of youth, is able to use almost inhuman agility to escape the shower of blades, where as alexander is not so fotunate. a spear is thrusted throughe him just above the heart severing an artery. his bleeding cant be controled easly. phenix calls for back up and an ambulance and persues the man, who isnt running but taking his time and just walking. in the door way phinix takes aim and shouts. the man and phenix make eye contact and suddently phenix is strucken by clouded visions of events perhaps to come and another shodowy man and black birds. Phenix shakes off the vision and recalls what happened just moments ago. after coming to ther realization of, shoot to kill or die phenix is prepaired to fire. phenix pulls the trigger and the bullet hits its mark; dead shot in the heart.the man falls. pheix bends down as an attempt ot calm himself when the man rises. stricken with disbeliefe and stunned with frear phenix's immediate responce is to aim and fire agian. however before the trigger is pulled the second time hes gun recoils and blows itself apart. phenix falls but is uninjured. he looks over and sees the ambulanc making their way through the halls and tidus' bloody body. with thoughts of retribution phenix is back on his feet and with no gun takes a sword off from display titled "judgment". phenix races all the way up the stairway with backup not far behind. and another conflict will begin. the man gives a lector speech about the difference between inspiration and insanity and the fine line between madness and power. phenix couldnt care less about he veiws of a murderer. phenix slashes and the man, cutting his hood and putting a mark on the face of the enemy. but this time its different. it hurts. and its not healing much like the bullet wound to the heart. his hood down and face exposed the man has a look of fustracion and confusion. the doors again burst open and phinix's help has arrived all with heavy fire power. the man was careless but still keeps a look of controle. he opens the book he stole and recites a passage. a tremindouse wind sturs. phenix shouts the orders to fire but to no use. the men cant hold a steady aim in the new weather. when the man thrusts his arms forward, several bodies of mist projected themselves in different directions. it almost appeared as if creatures were visably swiming throughe the air.phenix braced himself for the on coming body of solid air. it slams into phenix but almos bounces right off. afterwards the sword had an almos pale moonlight glow for a moment. just a moment.the wind stomps. phenix is back on his feet a regains his balance. the man is gone but there is a bigger problem. the otehr officers havnt regained conciouseness. phenix checks their pulse and they're all dead. just before he radios in medical attention one of the officers gets up. phenix loses focus of radio to attend to the wounded officer. then they all start moving.
their skin peels and bones re structure. they've become monsters.
so how do u all like my preview of Pergatory.
i left u with some questions on ur mind like whats up with the sword and the book? whos the hooded ma? why did phenix have a vision? and who was the other shodowy figure in it?
I thought it would be fun after u read this preview you would make you own assumsions thoughout the story as it ventured deeper. i think it adds kind of a game to the reader.
so wat do u all think of the preview?
game over
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